Record (online - Voice - Recorder.com) by ANGELINA BIJU published on 2020-01-16T15:39:10Z https://www.poetryoutloud.org/poem/father/ Comment by chicagopoetoutloud this line could use more emphasis and can be more inquisitive. 2020-01-23T15:38:42Z Comment by chicagopoetoutloud all six elements of reciting are there, however you could've ended on a stronger note. words that linger with us 2020-01-21T17:37:09Z Comment by JAEREN DADIVAS Your voice was very easy to understand and the poem went at a decent steady pace. Your emphasis on the rhymes make the poem more enjoyable to listen to. However, I think that you can change up the tempo on certain parts of your poem to further emphasize the more meaningful lines such as in the second to last stanza. 2020-01-21T17:36:05Z Comment by Buddy Pesofiga I thought that you accurately captured the rhythmic nature of the poem which made it more entertaining to listen to. This emphasized the rhyme patterns and this enhanced the recital. 2020-01-21T17:15:07Z Comment by ARYAN MASHRUWALA Complementary: I like how you kept the tone of your voice consistent with the tone of the poem. I also like how you read it in a somewhat musical way to match some of the rhymes the poem has. 2020-01-21T04:42:27Z