Mini IOC on Mercedes Benz by Janis Joplin by Luciana Bula published on 2017-08-27T22:04:10Z Genre Aprendizaje Comment by laura ortiz fresen Criterion A: 9-The commentary shows an excellent understanding of the text. You could mention more about the context of the chosen song and maybe develop more in detail the themes taking into account the author's intentions. Is effectively supported by well chosen references to the text. 2017-11-19T08:35:40Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz good, Explain the importance pf this song on todays context 2017-10-27T00:55:28Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz good explanation between relations in concepts 2017-10-27T00:54:53Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz is not completely explain the effect of repetition 2017-10-27T00:53:57Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz good quoting exercise 2017-10-27T00:53:24Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz Good example 2017-10-27T00:52:56Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz good theme explanation 2017-10-27T00:52:32Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz nice to have a relation between the text and the historical events 2017-10-27T00:51:45Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz good analysis of the effect on the reader of Irony 2017-10-27T00:51:18Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz good, to say theimportance of the literary features 2017-10-27T00:51:02Z Comment by Juan josé Mora matiz excellent, Telling the examiner your IOC structure ois nice 2017-10-27T00:50:34Z