making homework with mikkel by Sebastian Bitsch Juhl published on 2013-04-14T21:03:11Z Comment by Anna Holm Your presentation is much too short and you have not really done as the task requires. You needed to include different aspects of the story and you ought to take in quotes that support the things you are saying. Grade: 02 2013-05-02T06:49:22Z Comment by Anna Holm Your own opinion on the story is not relevant in this kind of presentation 2013-05-02T06:48:00Z Comment by Anna Holm Good that you include the three personalities 2013-05-02T06:47:09Z Comment by Anna Holm You need to a bit more precise - how and by whom is Mary? 2013-05-02T06:46:57Z Comment by Anna Holm She has, not he has 2013-05-02T06:45:49Z Comment by Anna Holm Remember to give the listener your agenda/plan of your presentation 2013-05-02T06:45:42Z Comment by Anna Holm Good that you present the text 2013-05-02T06:45:12Z