OSC 146 ー Sinmad ー Dreamland Express by Broken Moon published on 2021-04-17T18:35:29Z Genre Ambient Comment by Robert Chavez I like this best when it feels off kilter. 2021-05-16T04:22:19Z Comment by Robert Chavez The percs have me hooked already... 2021-05-16T04:20:37Z Comment by ontrackp I think pads would have worked better than the arps -- they make what is a potentially lovely track a little pedestrian (sorry - I like the song, but they are kinda cheesy). 2021-05-15T20:37:18Z Comment by ontrackp The lead sound is not up to the rest of the piece. 2021-05-15T20:36:07Z Comment by ontrackp Nice beat. 2021-05-15T20:35:25Z Comment by zarf I really like the drums and the bass works really really well for me, like a band. I find the arps a bit loud and the lead a bit in need of more life somehow. 2021-05-15T15:43:43Z Comment by IV Perfect atmosphere work and great drums! 2021-05-15T14:44:32Z Comment by ] Peter H [ nice catchy melody ... that could be the chant in a football stadium "Unitied in football we are here..." 2021-05-15T14:44:31Z Comment by ] Peter H [ good perc + bass combo. patches and how they are played. 2021-05-15T14:43:16Z Comment by DoctorBob Could do with a better lead sound. The delayed arps arevery nice. 2021-05-13T13:57:30Z Comment by DoctorBob Nice percussion. 2021-05-13T13:56:42Z Comment by DoctorBob Nicely played bass ... and THAT first hit! You got me there. 2021-05-13T13:56:29Z Comment by Liqih I like that it's structured like a song. And nice drums. 2021-05-12T20:40:56Z Comment by h.s.j.e. Great finish. 2021-05-12T15:16:28Z Comment by h.s.j.e. Love the glitchy lead, here. 2021-05-12T15:16:03Z Comment by h.s.j.e. Nice change. 2021-05-12T15:15:25Z Comment by h.s.j.e. Not sure I completely dig the drums, but they're nice and bright and clean, which I do like. 2021-05-12T15:14:22Z Comment by Liqih can't download this, can you change that please? 2021-05-12T12:21:04Z Comment by Spring Goose i LOVE the mood of this song 2021-05-12T12:02:03Z Comment by Spring Goose i LOVE the 80s drums 2021-05-12T12:00:44Z Comment by opdobqo Good filtering fade at the end here. Very nice. I do have to agree with @ELEX though, the lead was not the best. I think it was one of those unfortunate confluences of events - the actual sound of it wasn't too bad but it was soooooo straight and on the beat, the ends of the notes were all so bang on too, there was no release to it, no attack, no ebb and flow in the playing or the sound. You can get away with a stiff timing if there's some decent movement in the sound, you can get away with a stiff static sound if there's some decent phrasing in the playing/programming, but getting away with both is really hard. And, in all honest, the way to save this may have been to concentrate on the endings of the notes, keep them shorter, give the release part of the envelope something to do. I don't know, just suggestions 2021-05-11T10:54:12Z Comment by opdobqo Nice transition there. Always good to change it up. I like the arpeggios in the background. 2021-05-11T10:50:01Z Comment by opdobqo I like the drums, good work. The crash sounded like one I played once that seemed to have been made from discarded foil wrappers glued together, but it works in context. Kick and snare are both excellent though. 2021-05-11T10:49:34Z Comment by ELEX This lead feels stiff and awkward, which hurts the track as whole consderably imho ; The drums/bass/pads sound good to me. 2021-05-09T15:38:10Z Comment by treeheated That first crash gave me a little bit of a fright... other than that, the drums sound really good 2021-05-05T15:32:48Z Comment by eraze the borders I like the panning 2021-05-04T16:53:29Z Comment by eraze the borders 80ies vibes 2021-05-04T16:52:33Z