ash by Alec's WIPs published on 2020-03-30T21:06:53Z Comment by Ray Viviano Cool sounds and vibe going on in this track overall. Definitely could work as a set opener. 2020-07-16T21:20:51Z Comment by Ray Viviano Overall, vox could come through a bit more. 2020-07-16T21:19:48Z Comment by Ray Viviano Master or bass/sub bus could use a highpass around 18-20hz. 2020-07-16T21:19:02Z Comment by Ray Viviano Overall the track is a bit dark. The aggressive bass bits are bright enough but everything surrounding is a bit dark. 2020-07-16T21:17:56Z Comment by Ray Viviano Bright foley elements could use a boost 2020-07-16T21:16:01Z Comment by jzoott i think there could be more complimentary melodic elements to the vocals during this section. the vocals should be the focus here it sounds like 2020-07-16T21:00:12Z Comment by jzoott you could take out the BWAH during the vocals completely so when it comes back in it has more impact 2020-07-16T20:59:28Z Comment by jzoott i think if this is just an opener i think it could just end at the end of the vocal verse 2020-07-16T20:58:31Z Comment by jzoott i think the pads could come up a little 2020-07-16T20:58:08Z Comment by Evan Ruby I feel the vox could be a bit brighter here and still feel sufficiently moody 2020-07-16T20:32:31Z Comment by Lurr overall there seems to be more room for the quiet percussion and background elements to come a little more forward, since its a pretty minimal track 2020-07-16T19:52:29Z Comment by Lurr overall, it kinda feels like the track is building to something bigger than is delivered in the track. I guess that makes sense if it was originally a set opener. 2020-07-16T19:51:01Z