Tell Me Everything by Erin Wolf published on 2021-11-28T04:04:26Z Copyright Erin Wolf 2021 Week 48 Prompt: Tell Me Everything Secondary self-imposed challenge: Write a song in 1 minute or less (so I did and tried on a more pop-kind of sound, ope) i remember years ago the heavens opened up with snow you were dancing by my side we didn't have to hide but now we're sitting all alone it's cold and dark quite like stone all the memories in my mind some are cruel and some are kind yet i still need to know just why you had to go tell me everything right now all your fears and all your doubts tell me why they hold you back why we had to fade to black did you lose your hopes and dreams and all the joy love can bring can you give me one last sign or a moment of your time to tell me everything Genre Pop Comment by Rich Waring I really like the chorus melody lines here - I'd love to hear them repeated and given the chance to echo and bed in to my ear a bit more. 2021-12-16T10:20:17Z Comment by Sky of Change Looking forward to hearing the entire song - sounds like a smash... 2021-12-14T23:20:27Z Comment by Evan McDoniels this is so great, I want more verses and minutes of this song! 2021-12-09T23:14:47Z Comment by Bernard Dady Yes, very contemporary sound and the beginings of a grteat pop tune. Next challenge is to work it up into a 3 minute hit. 2021-12-09T10:40:25Z Comment by JTR What a great minute! I love it, it's an entire movie in just a handful of chords and words. True songsmithery. 2021-12-07T02:23:43Z Comment by Nikki Dean Listened to this twice. One of your best so far in my opinion. Lovely vocal, clear, full of angst. riveting 2021-12-06T16:59:12Z Comment by Claes This is absolutely a hit song in the making! That melody in the chorus has some beautiful lines and great rhythm to the phrasing. I'm totally with Joshua on this one. 2021-12-06T15:27:02Z Comment by niki s whah-this is so cool too. :) 2021-12-06T03:31:53Z Comment by Music Box I know it was intentional that you kept this short, but I would love to see this expanded. I am getting an Adele sort of vive from this. Really nicely done. 2021-12-05T19:33:54Z