If This Is The Last Song I Write (featuring Ramone) by Marc Freak published on 2021-02-22T21:55:29Z I'm so grateful that Ramone offered her voice for this number. It is a piano based ballad about a vitriolic songwriter who is nearing the end of his days and his partner who just wants him to write her something nice before he passes. Ramone has a beautiful voice, and I've been listening to her songs at https://soundcloud.com/ra_mo_ne for a while now. Go visit her page and have a listen :) IF THIS IS THE LAST SONG I WRITE HIM: If this is the last song I write I'd like it to be one without spite Something I'm not accustomed to And reflects unfairly on you But as my fingers strike chords All my intentions are ignored And the bitterness stored in my head Is sprayed out of the page Like a beast freed from cage "Oh how hurt and betrayed" is what's said If it's that bad a life I should take a razor or knife So loved ones taste the strife instead What a pitiful groan - just leave me all alone HER: If these are the last words you pen Before you print them please count to ten A ballad or soft lullaby Would be worthy to remember you by So in these cold lonely night as reality bites And depression hits heights I've not known There are words I can clutch And though that is not much It's far better to touch than that tome Full of hate, hurt and lies And the people despised In the songs I'm surprised I was shown Fake feelings overblown, don't leave me all alone HIM: I did not know how you felt and though my heart is does melt My romantic words smelt fake and foul HER: It need not be Shakespeare - Just words that loud and clear State your love, not the fear that you growl BOTH: Oh how happy we are, yippie de la-de-da But the feelings are marred by the sound Of the pending last line oh please more time to shine HIM: Give me time to write one song more So I can capture all we've explored Genre Folk & Singer-Songwriter Comment by Marc Olivieri what a beautiful duo 2021-08-26T18:41:46Z Comment by Carlo Neve Great song! Do keep breathing! 2021-04-26T21:19:47Z Comment by KhanWu Awesome song. Bravo! 2021-04-20T11:21:44Z Comment by Fur & the Perfume Scandal This is so good. 2021-03-23T23:24:30Z Comment by Helge Nice use of cliche hook here... ๐๐ 2021-03-18T10:42:51Z Comment by Pierre Bordetti Beautiful Folk song, nice vocal !! 2021-03-09T10:38:20Z Comment by STL NiNjA Nyce song guys well enjoyed๐ค๐ป 2021-03-08T04:20:27Z Comment by El Cjadaldiaul well done. very well done 2021-03-04T21:18:42Z Comment by Tea R. Sea Beautiful work, great duet! 2021-03-02T20:38:21Z Comment by Neurotic Beauties deep and beautiful! 2021-02-28T21:40:31Z Comment by O#D Composer Very beautiful 2021-02-26T18:04:35Z Comment by Jeff Roberts nice tune and concept; he / she (or partner/partner) counterpart vocals are always compelling! 2021-02-26T14:31:58Z Comment by TheGat(s) Fun track, like the songwriting. 2021-02-26T01:28:40Z Comment by Pier WILL The piano is fantastic, the voices sound good in this dark and sad melody. Nice collaboration! Excellent work :-) 2021-02-25T15:42:38Z Comment by Jonathan Beckenstein rather affecting, and great contrast with the other associated material. 2021-02-25T12:29:49Z Comment by Default Sensor Really nice musically, great collab and great story lots of pathos!! 2021-02-23T15:07:11Z Comment by Echo Garage great vocals by both of you! 2021-02-23T14:24:02Z