Hallways Of Hell (prod.AngelLaCiencia Beats) by Zero published on 2021-01-28T00:12:46Z This took a lot longer than I wanted it to. Lyrics: Chorus (0:10) Students not thinking the same They got us divided Torn into major groups Pushing standards,as if we haven’t been trying Bashing heads into TBs Out out of gas they tire out Some of them like this shit The rest envision them dropping out Have their own problems This shit don’t make that easier Hard to commit to it School take a toll on their health Work piling down on me Crashing down like a meteor They instruct how to be a bot I’ve come here to be a boss Verse 1 Been taught all the useless shit I think it’s safe to admit I’ve thrown these mental misfits Put a risk to one's wrist I feel no need to persist How can I go on? Forced to study till the crack of dawn I feel like I’m sinking They’re happiness shrinking Force you the 9-5 Work till I’m sleep deprived Teachers not satisfied I’m locked in these cages Giving me minimum wages I’m lost in this maze I am aware that it’s all a phase but This shit getting harder Yet I appear as if I’m not phased I’m told it’s the only way I feel I am let astray Like my work didn’t get displayed It’s not evidential That this shit is essential I feel like school stole from me And I’m feeling revengeful This shit is tearing me apart I’m about to go mental Verse mixed by: https://soundcloud.com/matiss2s Genre Hip-hop & Rap Comment by Robby Glass Ye bru i like the flow bro, but again add some variety with vocal tone, othef than that bars are hard, keep up the good work 2021-03-03T19:58:51Z Comment by Kolten on the right track lyrically but the delivery and mixing needs work, i liked more than i didnt like just be more confident and keep grinding 2021-03-01T03:52:16Z Comment by Old Enemy Lyrics are excellent. The vocal mix could be improved but I actually don't think it's a huge issue. Main thing for me is that I'm not feeling the flow. That's a really personal thing and so I don't want to criticize, but for me it's not lining up with the natural rhythm of the language. 2021-02-28T18:48:32Z Comment by Sugoiboy Everything about your lyrics is unique and I like that a lot but your mix is lacking. Without your lyrcis down below I wouldn't understand a thing. So your mix definitely needs work and I'd say try to not mumble as much. I hope you're doing alright mate, you're talking about some pretty serious things here. 2021-02-28T10:06:04Z Comment by Nicky On SMasH Dope Vibes! 2021-02-28T01:42:20Z Comment by Alkane I agree w what the others said. Vocals were lacking. Unfortunately your talent matches your name 2021-02-26T12:19:42Z Comment by ESP00N This was good, but the voice is too muddy. 2021-02-25T04:11:15Z Comment by ohricky like to see what else you got 2021-02-24T17:39:16Z Comment by ohricky keep it up fam! 2021-02-24T17:38:57Z Comment by ohricky Your voice kind of hides in the mix and makes a a little hard to understand the lyrics. I like your style though it's very unique 2021-02-24T17:38:46Z Comment by lunar lyrics are the best part of this jawn. hope everything is going well bro 2021-02-16T23:04:32Z Comment by Zero @acid-crack: thanks alot 2021-02-03T19:52:26Z