Jeremiah Was A Naughty Boy (music by BoxTox, bass and story by Garddwr Porffor) by Garddwr Porffor published on 2022-03-21T17:50:34Z This is the fourth part of the story of Veronique and Jeremiah, going backwards in time. The music and cover artwork is by the wonderful BoxTox https://soundcloud.com/user-247600493 based on his 'I Remember My Friends and How We Used To Play' https://soundcloud.com/user-247600493/i-remember-my-friends-and-how-we-use-to-play Thank you Jonas : ) I added the bass, story and vocal. Today the Welsh Senedd (Parliament) has outlawed smacking children. Jeremiah was a naughty boy His daddy told him so Though he tried to be a good boy and he tried with all his might He couldn't make them happy He never seemed to get it right Veronique was pale these days At times he'd see her shaking I love you mummy he would say To try and make her better But that just seemed to make things worse It just seemed to upset her I'll look after us mummy Jeremiah said Stroking Veronique gently as she lay upon the bed Let's go to the picnic on Saturday That would be lots of fun Perhaps, if we ask her nicely Dominique could come? Your daddy is a nasty man and he's never coming back When Jeremiah thought about The things that he would lack He wouldn't miss his daddy Or his shouting or his smacks Genre Allegorical Musical Story Comment by John Dyhouse Quite an original song/lyrics 2024-10-18T22:55:50Z Comment by markjbennett Excellent post Viv and Jonas 2024-10-12T15:36:32Z Comment by Hossein Doshvargard Amazing! 2023-01-18T22:32:25Z Comment by Edward Cortes composer Very nice music voice and lyrics, amazing song. 2022-09-03T05:25:13Z Comment by v Just superb 2022-07-27T16:44:35Z Comment by Zaeb. Beautiful 2022-05-17T19:52:44Z Comment by Matthias am Klavier Wow, very unique composition, Garddwr! 2022-04-27T19:46:04Z Comment by Anomon O such a tale. great storytelling, and that rhythmic Music moves everything along so addictively. Love that Bass and Clarinet conversation as well. 😎 2022-04-24T19:19:07Z Comment by betterlate Wonderful! Helen x 2022-04-23T16:09:42Z Comment by The Windscale Blues Experiment Marvellous collaboration....great storytelling..excellent performances! 2022-04-03T13:16:39Z Comment by oddrun eikli Best storytelling Viv, the best! 2022-04-02T13:48:18Z Comment by N.o.b.S. very beautiful jazz ballad! 2022-04-02T12:45:05Z Comment by Illos le résultat est incroyable , votre collaboration est une réussite !! 2022-03-31T14:54:19Z Comment by U426 This is different :) 2022-03-30T16:48:50Z Comment by Tea R. Sea Very interesting work, cool calm vibe! 2022-03-30T16:44:31Z Comment by STONERJAZZ ahh.. such a pleasant and unique song and story... 2022-03-30T12:40:32Z Comment by tbone711 Super cool and slick atmosphere, love the whisper vocal! 2022-03-30T10:27:08Z Comment by Louis Taverna These short story musicals are always beautifully written and arranged, from everyone involved! 2022-03-29T18:57:15Z Comment by SuZanne Ledwith Such a great pairing. 2022-03-29T13:05:11Z Comment by J.Rivas Interesting song cool vibe. 2022-03-28T11:57:55Z Comment by baie des anges Belle histoire musicale 2022-03-27T10:30:04Z Comment by B.Moth (understated and powerful all cloaked in klezmer ish culture) 👏 bravo 👏🙏 2022-03-25T18:37:31Z Comment by newshoe Such a wonderful project. Enjoyed how you have put this all together. 2022-03-25T15:40:57Z Comment by Jeff Roberts your speaking voice is great this is a rather naughty tune 2022-03-25T15:30:48Z Comment by Jeff Roberts really cool Klezmer vibe on this Viv; very gentle tune --glad no instruments were manhandled in the making 2022-03-25T15:29:16Z Comment by hogyard Excellent track 2022-03-25T14:59:57Z Comment by Baji cool track 2022-03-25T13:39:35Z Comment by burn.it.smith Inklings of Ravels Bolero, beautifully crafted and a delight to the ears! 2022-03-25T12:37:45Z Comment by Steve Coombes Wonderful and lyrical song 🎵. 2022-03-25T10:39:31Z Comment by THE BOY I love this mysterious mood❣️ I can't find the word to explain my feeling...but I think this song is very charming‼️ 2022-03-25T05:36:12Z