Alternative Rock

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NSFW Mabey trigger warning possibly
These are all demos. I'm hoping to get some feedback so I can refine them. I think the guitar during the verses is too quiet. re-sing all the chorus just not hitting the notes I want.

lyrics:
He pulled out his 9mm and pointed it at me/Laughed and said it was all in jest
Then he targeted at the stars and fired/and I must confess

Chorus
The times I been scared for my life have all been with you
I never know what you will do
But the best time of my life have been with you
not a thing not a thing not a thing would I undo

V2
Don't get in the truck with him
You dont know what could happen
Burn the rubber off all the tires
You never know what's next to get set on fire
He loves his guns his knifes, blowing stuff up
No matter the excess it's just not enough

Chorus
The times I been scared for my life have all been with you
I never know what you will do
But the best time of my life have been with you
not a thing not a thing not a thing would I undo

V3
He put his knife to my throat with a wink
And brought back an ounce of co
It's amazing how many times we didn't sink
Didn't crash and burn didn't go up in smoke
Mabey today does he have his vest on?
Violence is just his preferred form of expression

Chorus
The times I been scared for my life have all been with you
I never know what you will do
But the best time of my life happen with you
not a thing not a thing not a thing I wouldn't do
but it's okay cuz nobody died this time it's okay cuz nobody died

The times I been scared for my life have all been with you
I never know what you will do
But the best time of my life have been with you
not a thing not a thing not a thing I wouldn't do
but it's okay cuz nobody died this day it's okay cuz nobody died

Seems a little quiet over here

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