Sh!ttown (WIP, Probably as finished as it will be)

Featuring "Evidently Chickentown" by John Cooper Clarke.
Started life as a very off kilter guitar track (with the bass and guitar in different keys) with some weird whammy noises and funk style lead guitar, some of the more traditional of which is still in at the end.
Then I thought about JCC poem and decided to add it and removed the weird psychedelic stuff and added the main riff.
Don't like my own vocals I think they should be in the deeper voice throughout and the lyrics were rushed just to add something to complete the track.
it was alluding to a family member who was mugged and beaten up in London in broad daylight after travelling to watch a show.
it's probably not going to get the vocals redone, ever.