Bearer of the Curse (Dark Souls-Tribute, Demo)

As I mentioned my complete Lyrics for a Dark Souls-Tribute Song on Machinae Supremacy's Twitter-Account, I couldn't get the arrangement out of my head. After the guys told me to record it, this is what I did.

I started today, 16:30 and finished the demo right now. So that's... 3,5 hours work. That's okay for a rough demo like that. ;)
This is it, my Dark Souls-Tribute Song!
I will definitely do a Video on YouTube later.

Thanks to the guys from Machinae for motivating me!

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Enjoy and leave some comments on the way!
Support is much appreciated.

Finally, my lyrics:
"Bearer of the Curse

[Verse]
My memories, gone long ago
The beast in me, I let it go
The only thing I feel is pain
This curse is driving me insane

I came along to find a cure
In this land insecure
With bottled ember in my hands

[PreChorus]
We are united on this battlefield
So raise your sword, prepare your shield

[Chorus]
A cursed mark on our shoulder
We've met the reaper and returned
and while our body's getting colder
We don't forget, what we have learned

[Verse 2]
One million souls I must defend
Infinite hordes, still there's no end
We bring the dark into the light
We came prepared into this fight

We are the dead, we are alive
From every death we will revive
Stronger than before!

[PreChorus] [Chorus]

[Breakdown]
We are hollow
Into the light we follow

[PreChorus] [Chorus]"

Bye!